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Is there any more information on whether i can submit a story that i'm using for a assignment in University? I would love to have the feedback of some of you. I have read some of the replies to som…

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Rosie McVeigh commented on Benjamin Brayley's blog post 'Funk master FLASH, and the Furious Fiction.'

This is cool ben, you have summed up the early-early years of parenthood nicely. Funny :p

June 8

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Funk master FLASH, and the Furious Fiction.

I close my eyes, my mind fills with images of the apparatus. The soft writhing being laying on it and contorting its limbs. It screams, it drools, it consumes everything. It lies in wait, silent, peaceful. Echoes of it still linger in the house. At…

June 7

Benjamin Brayley commented on Benjamin Brayley's blog post '"Sunday Morning and Im Falling"'

Thanks Hayley and yes I am the same Ben. This was a rough draft, my final draft is much better thanks to some of the advice i got from this website and from Naomi. I might post the final piece later on but Im not sure yet. Thanks for the positives!

June 7

Hayley Biggs commented on Benjamin Brayley's blog post '"Sunday Morning and Im Falling"'

Hey Ben, I think you are the same Ben that was in my COR109 class. Anyways I really enjoied this. Although it's an inner monologue it really works as it's so believable. I also like that its set in a common everyday house it allows the plot to work…

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June 6

eks commented on Benjamin Brayley's blog post '"Sunday Morning and Im Falling"'

oh - one other thing - i remember gary saying when i did that course that they get a truly ridiculous number of stories that start with alarm clocks ringing, for some reason. a more original start to your story might impress them.

April 25

eks commented on Benjamin Brayley's blog post '"Sunday Morning and Im Falling"'

Hello, First thing to fix is your consistency with tense. you switch between past and present a bit in the beginning. I agree with you, some of the early descriptive stuff (ie. the blood) is a bit turgid, and if this is for the USC creative writin…

April 25

Benjamin Brayley commented on Benjamin Brayley's blog post '"Sunday Morning and Im Falling"'

Great feedback! It seems like every single thing I thought I should change, does need to be changed. Thanks Natalie for mentioning being more descriptive about the cat, Swedish looking and Google cool bands. Im actually excited to go back and descri…

April 25

natalie commented on Benjamin Brayley's blog post '"Sunday Morning and Im Falling"'

I'm more tired than usual. Hence, I might come off as blunt. Advanced apologies. I'm a nice person. honest. ;) I like the title. Nice reference to The Velvet Underground there. I'm big on Warhol. But unless I'm mistaken, there needs to be an apostr…

April 25

L F Leotta commented on Benjamin Brayley's blog post '"Sunday Morning and Im Falling"'

firstly i do not go through every story and mark it like i am an editor or a uni tutor. i will just point out one or two examples of what is possibly not quite right with it. firstly period blood is different to virginity blood, so therefore, for m…

April 25

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"Sunday Morning and Im Falling"

Hi this is my story give it a once over for me! Be critical! I wont lose confidence if you rip it to bits i still have to hand it in! :D Oh and i have weeks to clean it up about 6 now if i'm not mistaken! “Sunday Morning and I’m Falling” By Ben Bray…

April 25

Benjamin Brayley commented on Benjamin Brayley's video 'Monty Python- Soccer Match'

I just love Karl Marx warming up.

April 24

Caitlin Noakes commented on Benjamin Brayley's video 'Monty Python- Soccer Match'

I LOVE this sketch! Although, I think it would have been more appropriate if Karl Marx had made the first move.

April 24

Caitlin Noakes replied to Benjamin Brayley's discussion 'My school work...'

Hey, It should be fine. With regard to Safe Assign, it shows what websites it has picked up like material from, so if your story sets off any alarms, your tutor would be able to see that it's just that you've posted your story online.

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