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I agree with Mr Emel's comment.
I think a lot of the time the characters feelings can be shown without describing them directly.
"She talked, joked and laughed with them, smiling politely when appropriate." By describing the characters actions with…
Mr Emel has woken from his 'afternoon nap' and says:
"The art, in story, is not (only) what is said but what is unsaid." This story explains so much, and therefore says so little.
Re-work, with emphasis on showing. More importantly, conclude with…
A story I wrote a bit over a year ago that I found collecting dust. Comments are appreciated.
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Trauma
She was so alone, yet people surrounded her. People she knew, people she didn’t know and one person she should know better than most.…
Lol I love this vid :D
Awesome!! I really like this :)
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A story I wrote a bit over a year ago that I found collecting dust. Comments are appreciated.
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Trauma
She was so alone, yet people surrounded her. People she knew, people she didn’t know and one person she should know better than most. But she couldn’t bring herself to feel anything for them.
Her boyfriend leant forward and gave her a kiss. She wrapped her arms around him and kissed him back but there was no feeling. She was playing a part in an opera, one with so man… Continue
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Trauma
She was so alone, yet people surrounded her. People she knew, people she didn’t know and one person she should know better than most. But she couldn’t bring herself to feel anything for them.
Her boyfriend leant forward and gave her a kiss. She wrapped her arms around him and kissed him back but there was no feeling. She was playing a part in an opera, one with so man… Continue
Posted on September 13, 2009 at 6:12pm — 2 Comments
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